changeset 1305:21da6f34f3fb

Documentation tweak.
author Rob Landley <rob@landley.net>
date Sun, 28 Nov 2010 22:09:12 -0600
parents af9bf62b325b
children 8e10d025f1a5
files www/about.html
diffstat 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/www/about.html	Sun Nov 28 22:06:08 2010 -0600
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 software and run the result.</p>
 </td></tr></table>
 
-<p>Aboriginal Linux was written to serve the embedded community, but it
-has other uses as well:</p>
+<p>Aboriginal Linux has an obvious niche within the embedded community, but
+has many other uses as well:</p>
 
 <ul>
-<li><p><b>Allow package maintainers to reproduce and fix bugs on architecures
-they don't have access to or experience with.</b></p>
+<li><p><b>Allow package developers and maintainers to reproduce and fix bugs
+on architecures they don't have access to or experience with.</b></p>
 
-<p>Bug reports can include a link to a prebuilt Aboriginal image and a
+<p>Bug reports can include a link to a system image and a
 reproduction sequence (wget source, build, run this test).  This provides
 the maintainer both a way to demonstrate the issue, and a native
 development environment in which to build and test their fix.</p>